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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(27):My opinion on copying others' homework

发布时间:2013-07-22 17:54浏览次数:2002
要求:
假定你是李华,看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时,不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业,针对这种现象,请你以My opinion on copying others’ homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。


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主要原因
作业量大,偏难
对功课不感兴趣,懒惰
完成任务,取悦老师
 
危害及解决办法
抄袭不对,违反校规
要诚实,勤奋学习

有困难可请教同学和老师


个人看法

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My opinion on copying others’ homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework.
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句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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My opinion on copying others’ homework It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework.There are some reasons for students to do this,many students think that they have so much homework to do ,and some of their homework is a little difficult.And other students are not interested in their homework and aome of them are lazy to do it .Also ,there are still some students doing their work just to please their teachers.On my opinion ,it is wrong to copy others' homework,because it break the school rules.However,I think we should be honest to do our work and stdy hard.Of course,we can turn to our teachers if coming across some problems.

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