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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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With the change of times,now the human relationship is most indifferent than ever before,so that you can see that few people work in socity is very happy but often hear of complains all the day. What result in that?I think the reason why people feel lonely in the socitey is that now so many people are hard to maintain trust,so we often can see the strange images in our daily lifes that the number of people preferred locking themselves in their small houses to going out to talk with others.The results of losing trust is miserable.First,people will be separated from society if them keep themselves alone for a long time,which will have a terrible influence on personal development.Second,our socitey will be more and more harsh and difficult to be harmonous if lack of trust. According to that,I think it is very important to keep trust in human beings,and people should learn to trust others.I believe our society will be warm and wonerful if we can maintaining trust.

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