2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowsdays,people find more and more bueatiful package which really not be needed in market.furthermore,the price of package of commodity is much more than itself. what do you think of it? First,this is a means that merchant pursue economic profit.By means of extravagant package it can astract people's eyes,instead,ignore the value of goods itself.second,chinese people used to considering that the gifts which have extravagant package is seem as prestigious thing.what's more it can breed corruption. In a word,I object to exceessive packaging.it wastes resources and breed corruption.therefor,I suggest that we should establish laws to limit this phenomena.