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My school is alitter small,but have a lot of student.It locate Wuhan,a big city.My school have a labary which is not big,have a big gym.It is not a very beatiful college,but I love it.There have many dormitories,I lived in the seventh floor,is very high and is the highest floor.The teacher is very kind,the sudent is very nice,we have a great time in the school.