高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sports are play soccer,basketball,ping pong,tennis.But my best favorite sport is playing sccoer ball. I like it by chance.At that time I pick up a soccer,so I play it with my friends.After that, I love playing soccer very much. My favorite soccer star is Benhan in The United kingdom.My dream is become a professional football player.