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I found some students work hard to study english.but they can,t get a suitable result at last.i think there is something wrong with the learning methods .i have some suguestion to give you.firstly,with the help of yhe ever rapid development of internet technology,english is more and more vital to us.it is welcome by most people duo to various reasons.we should have a good habbit to take notes in class.after class we should review the the key points and do more exercises.in their spare time ,we can watch about english movies to improvement of ability .i think the most impornant thing is to have confindent to learn english
