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题目要求：
Prison is useless for crime problems and education can be better solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
参考翻译：
【有人认为监狱并不能解决犯罪问题，教育可能是更好的措施】
分析：
这是一道【A/D】比较型考试类型，题目中就解决犯罪问题方面，是否“教育”比“关监狱”更有效果进行提问
解题要点词：
1. useless：不同意，关监狱对于解决犯罪还是起着一定的威慑作用
2. better：可以同意，可以从长远角度考虑，“预防与未然
所以建议观点可以侧一边倒或采用让步论证法。
文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；文中部分句子有错误；全文结构较为严谨。
For those person who perpetrate crime that be sent into prison seemly is the best way to solve crime problem in society.However, this way suffered some opponents who think the best mean to decrease the rate of crime should be adopted from education.I think it is a wealth problem to be discussed. Maybe,the image of prison is filled with so indifference and scared that make people never want to do illegal things again.However,the results achieved by setting up prison are not so obvious due to the lack of mind of law for offenders.So,I think validity measures that can promote people' minds on the law should be taken,which refers the fundamental education that be advocated by many people.Firstly,correct values can be built during the process of education,and the teachers,as professional educators,will guide you to find your way and help you correct your mistake.Besides,you will realize some knowledge about laws which will make get deserve punishment once you break the law.To some extent,all of this can bound your action to prevent you committing crime.In addition,you can keep a health mental that make you never do any things which be banned by laws.Most of offenders more or less have mental problems or they can not control their emotion which will leads them to make mistakes because of their impulse. In the conclusion,the exist of prison do has its function but not the most important role on solving the problem of crime.I think the best way to deal with this trouble,for whole of society,should attach great importance on education,and do some change from the source.
