Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
We are making a general survey of the influent of the internet on the various people. At first we have to realized that internet add to fun and convenience in our life. It is reported that the number of internet bring a great change in mostly fields and challenges. It is clear show that internet have cons more than pros. It can not changes any field, If it's no.