Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
We are making a general survey of the influent of the internet on the various people. Firstly,we have to realize that internet add to fun and convenience for our life. It is reported that the number of internet bring a great change in mostly fields and challenges. It is clear show that the internet cons more than pros. It can not change any field, If it's no.