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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33558
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
评语:

文中词汇使用灵活,学术词汇使用较丰富;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science and technology, there are more and more internet users and social networking platforms. In recent years, new software has been rising in china, micro blog, which aims to provide information for public. Micro blog also known as weibo is based on a user’s relation, communication and information. Sharing-transmission-receiving is its notion. Users can share their information timely with about 140 words and 1-9 pictures. And in turn, they receive fresh, different ideas and information from another person. 2014. Weibo became listed on NASDAQ and its value of assessment about 3800 million dollars. Micro blog is of great importance to our society. On the economic, weibo is a good place for many companies to promote their own products. Compared with traditional media, such as TV and billboards, weibo promotion costs are cheaper, more effective. Secondly, weibo is the birthplace of the news and opinions of public. Through it many charitable donations hold effectively and patients survived with help from the public. Besides because of internet mass hunting, a lot of crimes have been exposed by sensitive and wise people. Just because of a picture, Biaoge, an official is put into prison for corruption exposed. In addition, for an individual, weibo is also a popular tool to enrich his own life. He shows his foods, families, friends on this platform, thus drive the development of camera soft wares. So far the users of weibo have increased more than 500 million, many investors optimistic about its development and think it has a light future.

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