2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(55):SMOKING

如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；连词使用偏少。

somking do damage to people's health.ever year,The 250,000,0 peoples was killed by smoking which can lead to heart disease, cancer and other disease. Still, many people find it difficult to stop smoking. someone think that be used to smoking,which is not easy to give up.The tobacco is make up of nicotine. Measures have been taken to help people keep away from the harm of smoking. In many cities, smoking is forbidden in public places. The danger of smoking is warned of everywhere. And newspapers are asked not to publish advertisements for cigarettes. World “No Smoking Day” has been set against smoking.