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With the advancement of economy and technology,now more and more people have their own computers,which offers much convenience to people's daily lives.But at the same time,we should also to see the disadvantages of the Internet. With the coming of Internet,people's lifestyle is changed very much,especially on the interpersonal communication.The impact of the Internet on the human communication is very huge.For instance,in the past,many people were like to sit together for chatting after they have a dinner,but now the leisure way of life is gone.Now most people are prefer contacting others by using their computers to talking in face to face.As a result of that,human relationship is no longer close like before,and it is not good to increase people's communicate skills. All in all,people's life can be more convenient because of the Internet,but it will have a bad effect on people's ability of deal with personal affairs if they over rely on it.To decrease the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication,all of us should use of Internet in a sensible way.
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