2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题TASK2

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，学术词汇的使用还有很大提升空间；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Going with the urbanisation, many individuals expects better life quality, such as better education and more job opportunities. While, the realty goes into pposite sides, for example, crowded traffic and less caring between people. From my point of view, there are three main factors contributing to the situation. The aspects can be divided into three hands. First of all, the increase rate of public infrastructure is less than the soaring rate of residents going to cities, which leads to lack of traffic. Moreover, Some of the individuals turn to private cars, which lead to traffic jams.secondly, increasing amount people in cities would increase the price of many daily necessities, such as rice and rent. It is not hard to find that the rents in Shanghai and Beijing which are big cities in china are really soaring, which push some workers live very far from their working places, that in turns to lead to bad traffic. Last but not least, those people are so busy focusing on making money to live in cities that the time spent with their families or friends are less. In other words, the those in cities would be lonely and have less emotion supports which is essential for our life. Thus, the life quality in city abased due to enough public infrastructure, increased life cost and less emotion supports. Fortunately, there some methods could be done to improve the situation. One of them is make a good plan for urbanisation, such as making limitations or standards to urbanisation, which could reduce density of people and relieve the overburden of local infrastructure. Another is more investion to community, like more activities which could improve communication between neighbours. One more, government could make some rule or investment to lower the price of daily necessities. In a word, governments could do more investment and attention to help their residents to have a better life.