2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowdays many products have the phenonment of excessive packaging.When we dismantle the package,only to find a small amount of things.The followings are the reasons. I think,first,most of the sellers want to sell more productors.Because of this attitude,excessive packaging begins overflowing and dues cause severe waste.What'more,the competition among the bussinessmen can led the phenonment of excessive packaging.At the same,the consumers' psychology also influence it.Many consumers think that excessive packaging may be a sign of expensive present to friends. In my opinion,excessive packaging is a waste of resourse and pollution to enviroment.It can cause white pollution.So,excessive packaging must be banned and bussinessmen should produce reasonable packaging products to ensure sustainable development .