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I think we should save our money in a right way. Being a smart consumer is to buy what you really need rather than to get a bargain. Take myself for an example, I used to prefer on sell almost anytime. Clothes, cosmety, and something else. Once upon a time, I saw a dress I very like, of course it was on sell, I bought it home finally to find it was too samll for me.