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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

发布时间:2013-07-31 17:52浏览次数:3228
要求:
学生上学通常有两种方式:乘公交车与骑自行车。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:
乘公交车:节省时间、节省体力
骑自行车:锻炼身体、灵活方便
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Going to School by Bus or by Bicycle
There are basically two ways to go to school.
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as you know,going to school by bus can save time and save our strength.it is confidence and cheap for the people.i think by bike is good as well.there are number of reasons for the increase of going to school by bike .firstlty,china,s highly sociable and people like to by bike .people oft=ten persuade others to bike when they are free.they can build our body and have more energy to attend class and do the homework.many people argue that the cost of bus is too high than the bike ,so bikers do it againand again. no matter who they are ,or what the reason is,any people should be buybike .we need to attach greater importance to education .

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