2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my hometown is beijing.i like it best.there are basiaclly 3 reasons .on one hand the city is full of love and when you are in trouble ,the stranger will help you.on one hand ,with the development of our country, The floor cover higher.our trafic increasingly developed. on the other hand .the quality is getting better and better.besides,