作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;请注意分段。
in our daily life ,we used to make a mistake that when we heared or see something and we begin to make a conclution of it .i think that it is not wise to us .as a matter of fact ,we often see something about it's apperance but we can not really understand it well ,that casue us make a wrong result .
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