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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71655
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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My sincere foreign friend--Tom,who comes from America,will come to China in a week.I have been doing full reperations for his coming carefully,for example,where will we go then and so on? After thinking twice,I am going to take him to Laojun Mountain,at an altitude of more than 2000 meters,and one of the most famous tourist attractions in my hometown.On the one hand,the place can make him experience the local,delicious food and know about our customs.I think the place is the best choice.On the other hand,after visiting the foot of the mountain,we can climb the mountain and appreciate the roadside scenery at the same time,in particular,all kinds of strange trees and other plants.When we reach the top of the mountain,we can watch the spectacular sea of clouds,which is so exciting. Of course,if time permits,I will take him to other fun places worth visiting.I hope we will have a meaningful and memorable trip!

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