小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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Yesterday our English teacher retired the job, so today a new English teacher come to teach us. My new English is a sunshine boy, he has a cinnamon skin,black eyes and his voice is so clear that you couldn't miss a word. His country is Geman,but he grow up in New York, his grandpa live there.He just gratuaded from New York University, and this is his first job.He's a good teacher, no matter how he act in the class or share his time with us after the class, we always have fun with him. Just like we grow up together.