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Saving money is important From my own perspective,as students,we do not have so much money to be spent.All of our money is from our parents.So what we need to do is saving money.What's more,saving is a vurtue in China. In terms of my experience,I always buy something which are on sale.Bcause I think it is not neccessary for us to buy them so costly.In addition,I never buy things which are useless.Last but not least,when I buy something,I'd like to compare with different stores so that I can get the most valubale things.In our daily life,no one can deny that saving is not a fabulous habit.And there is no doubt that we are supposed to form this splendid habit. From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that saving money is not bad for you.And maybe it is good for the whole society if we develop this habit.To a large extent,saving money can boost the development of society of hamony and peace.
