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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33595
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

Saving money is important. From my own perspective,as students,we do not have so much money to be spent.All of our money is from our parents.So what we need to do is saving money.What's more,saving is a virtue in China. In terms of my experience,I always buy something which are on sale.Bcause I think it is not neccessary for us to buy them so costly.In addition,I never buy things which are useless.Last but not least,when I buy something,I'd like to compare with different stores so that I can get the most valuable things.In our daily life,no one can deny that saving is not a fabulous habit.And there is no doubt that we are supposed to form this splendid habit. From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that saving money is not bad for you.And maybe it is good for the whole society if we develop this habit.To a large extent,saving money can boost the development of society of harmony and peace.

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