小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My goodfriend's name is Jane.She is a beautiful girl.She is come from England.She is eighteen years.Her family have four peopers,mother,father,brother and she.We at the same school now.She leaved China three years,she can speak a little of Chinese.We often play games together.She is very tall.She like swimming, she have pretty skirt.