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2012年10月13日雅思大作文真题:如何看待社会多元化

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:38浏览次数:3141
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题目要求:

The population of the mix of people from different culture and ethnic group, why, and is it positive and negative.

题目讲解:

第一段:介绍目前多元文化的社会现象

第二段:分析原因

1 飞机和通信技术

2全球化,人口流动增加

3 移民政策的影响

第三段:negative

1 文化冲突

2 文化同化或边缘化,年轻一代的文化认同危机

第四段:positive

1 文化融合,促进经济繁荣与文明

2 促进创新与发展

第五段:结论

词汇拓展:

1.    Metropolis 大都市

2.    co-existence 共存

3.    be attributed to 归因于

4.    temporarily 暂时地

5.    permanently 长期的

6.    beyond the national border 跨越国界

7.    facilitate 使…更容易

8.    without limitation of space and time 没有时间和空间的限制

9.    mobility 流动性

10.    to be specific 具体来说

11.    involved 相关的

12.    immigrate 移民

13.    distinctive = different不同的

14.    tolerate v.容忍 tolerant adj

15.    inclusiveness 包容

16.    accommodation 容纳

17.    multi-culture 多元文化,Multiculturalism

18.    embodiment 代表

19.    melting pots 熔炉

20.    collide 冲突

21.    dominant 主导的

22.    the tendency of 倾向性

23.    assimilate 同化

24.    marginalize 边缘化

25.    identity 身份认同

26.    idealistic 理想主义的

27.    egalitarian 平等的

28.    reverse 扭转

29.    deny 否认

30.    as …as 和…一样

31.    adapt to 适应

32.    Cultural diversity 文化多元

33.    stimulate 刺激

34.    enhance 加强

35.    prosperity n.繁荣, prosper v

36.    productivity 生产力

37.    brilliant 灿烂的

38.    civilization 文明

39.    featured with 以…为特征

40.    exotic 异国的

41.    integration 融合

42.    widen their horizon 扩大视野

43.    accelerate 加速

44.    keep pace with 保持步调

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评语:

文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,you can have a face-to face chat with people who have absolutely different culture with you rather than only relying on Internet or E-mile.And you will find that realize other cultures become so easy,which only demand you to notice those person who come from other countries.This phenomenon is a good example which demonstrate our society is experiencing diversion to a mix population and culture. Distinctively,the increasing number of people are more willing to choose to go aboard for further study,thinking they can expand their horizon and receive superior education.In addition,the open of Chinese traditional culture make more people have so interests on China that they hold up the minds of settle downing in China.All of these have gradually combine different culture together. However,whether the mix of different culture can bring positive effect to society or not is still a heat topic to be worthy discussing.Firstly,from the view of positive,we have to confess that any culture have its two sides of advantage and disadvantage,which ask people should learn to draw lessons from other culture.And the exchange of different culture can be benefit to find the drawbacks and revise them.At the same time,multiculturalism can contribute to the flourish of economy. On the other hand,some worries about the multiculturalism also should be considered.the history of every culture is so long that we can not change it easily,and some conflict among different culture or population will happen due to the form of background of culture.Besides,foreign cultures easily be chases after by domestic young people who always keep blind eyes when they face these fresh things. In the conclusion,multiculturalism can bring positive influence,but also can have bad effect on society.We should maintain a clear head when face other culture,choosing those can promote ourselves and abandon bad things.

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