小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend, she is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair and two black eyes. She has a red small mouth. She like wear red cloth and black trouse. She is good at singing and dance. She is a clever girl. She often help others, so we all like her.