2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to my country!Please follow me ,and you will find what a beatiful place it is ！ my country is a very small country which is located in middle of An Hui province. our country is in rich of nut,and you will be more smart after eating much nut.there are a lot of bamboo ,and they make the country become environmental protection。 when you live here,you will find the people here are very friendly,and talking.many activities will be on the goverment square what make people full of hapiniess 。 I think you will not want to leave the city after you stay here for a little time