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My friend Lucy is pretty girl who is about 5.3 feet tall, and she has a pair of beautiful black eyes. Since she graduation, she has had long and light brown hair till waist. As you image how long her hair is. She is a introverted and frugal person who always travel everywhere with him self. She is an accountant so she is careful to do everything. While she is optimistic and enthusiastic for life. sometimes we will go out and she always pay for. That is why I like her so much. kidding, she is a nice person that she has 3 lovely cats.
