2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(55):SMOKING

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；作者词汇量较小，单词拼写也要注意；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

smoking presents some disadvantages.for example,people may get heart disease and cancel,many ppeople in the word died of smoking have something to do with the smoking. there are three major reasons for this phenomenon.frist,a great many people form a habbit to smoke,it contain nicotine and make people get addicated it . in my opinion,in the public