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My friend Lucy is pretty girl who is about 5.3 feet tall, and she has a pair of beautiful black eyes. Since she graduation, she has had long and light brown hair till waist. As you image how long her hair is. She is a introverted and frugal person who always travel everywhere with him self. She is an accountant so she is careful to do everything. While she is a optimistic and enthusiastic for life. sometimes we will go out and she always pay for. That is why I like her so much. kidding, she is a nice person that she has 3 lovely cats.
