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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Nowadays,we often can observe the strange image that many people are failed to make success although most of them were hard to work.That's because all of them were not wise enough?No,the reason why they're failed is that they are put all eggs in one basket. It is said that the concentrate and hard work can bring success.But it is not always be correct.What cause that?I think the reason is very complexing but I can still list the point.First,everything is in changing,nobody can predict what will happen in the next time.So it is important to make a plan B if you want to be successful.Second,the perfect preparation is a vital factor to achieve the plan,and the elaborate steps always as important as the attitude.However,there is few people can handle both of them. In conculsion,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.So it is necessary to make a plan B and do the well-preperation in order to make success.

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