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Name: Wang Haiyang. E-mail:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com. Send to E-mail:sales-department@hotmail.com. Time:2008 Dec. 23 13:00. Subject:Please check your product list. Dear Mr. Johnson, We had got 3,000 products on Dec. 22, but we should get 3,500 products according to our signing of the No. 35 order. We had never got other 500 products since now. Please you check your product list at once. We are looking forward to your early reply! Your singly! Wang Haiyang