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My Idea of Saving Money Form a recent survey of student life, 67% of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better. In my opinion, I support the rest ones. Saving money is very important and necessary. Firstly, saving money is a good habit and the parents should help their kids cultivate the habit of saving money. If the parents meet the need of their children and give much money to them whenever they ask for money, the kids are probably accustomed to using money at random. They don't aware of the hardship of making money and just using money. Once they form the bad habit, they won't help using money and it will strengthen the parents' burden. Secondly, saving money is helpful to our future life. Everything is possible. Maybe one day we will encounter with big problems in our life, then the money we saved could help us out of the problem. Lastly, saving money is also a good way of investment. Only if we have enough money and a good idea of investment, we can make more money and then live through a good life. All in all, saving money is a good habit and everyong should form this habit and create for us a bright and beautiful future.
