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2013年5月18日雅思大作文真题:School Curriculum Design

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:00浏览次数:796
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Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

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Under so fierce circumstances,what knowledge or skills one person should acquire is really of importance,which is a source of constant debate.Some people believe that learning history is extremely significant,while others hold the opposing view that subjects more associated with life should be learn well.This article will elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages. It is fair to say that learning history in school is quite necessary for students' development,even for the country's construction.Keeping in mind what happened in history can help to build students' valuable characters,especially the feelings of patriotism. Furthermore,children can behavior in right way through drawing on the experiences in the history.Of course,the whole people's personality is vital for the development of the nation. However,in current society,being realistic and acquiring some practical skills are the basic living rule.So there are so many people think that learning subjects more relevant to life is the key point.Facing so severe competition, only learning those skills that can help them live in the society,can the students not be weeded out.Last but not least, history has already been outdated,people should live in the moment and move on. In the light of those facts,we can come to the conclusion that we can learn history in school and keep what happened in history in our mind,but history is not the essential part of our life.On the contrary,learning subjects which can teach us how to live in current society is the important thing.

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