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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2057
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

要求

1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
字数:150满分:100分
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

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Nowadays,we can observe more and more people are like to send their kids to art classes.Some people are the supporters of this measure,because in their opinions, the more kids learn,the more kids have.And they think the art classes will set a stage for children's success in the future. However,some of other people do not agree to this measure.In their eyes,all the kids should have a lovely childrenhood because it is an essential part of children's life,which also will have an important effct on building kid's character.In addition,they think kid's burder will gained if kids attends to the art classes. For my part,I think the parents must be careful while they're thinking about this mearsue,and they should adapt to child's interests when they're make decision for children.

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