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To what extent do you agree or disagree?
注意：这道题不要泛泛地写媒体的优劣势，而应集中在influence what people think is important.
提纲：
Negative:Manipulation of the mass in politics, consumption, value change
positive:1.Call for national action for public interest 2.Promote awareness of some important issues
文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持，学术词汇积累也做的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
With increasing intruding pace of advertising into our life, it is inevitable that advertisement has an visible impact on our minds. Some individuals are worried about the negative impacts on us. While others welcome the prevailing advertising as it comes with many merits. From my point of view, the popularirty of advertisement like swords has two edges. There some merits coming with increasing amount of advertising in our daily life. On one hand, advertising is one of effective to spread information. For instance, environmental ones could be used to increase public awareness to save energy and respect our surroundings. Moreover those with sound could educate the illiterate. On the other hand, advertising could make our life much convenient. Apart from telling us a more effective vacuum, advertising would tell us those price and defferences, which could help us get bargains as much as possible. However, some demerits can not be neglected. One of them is the impacts on kids which could impact their mental growth. It is known that kids are easier influenced by environment which give some foreign companies the opportunity to change residents' culture. What is more, some advertising is not censored strictly which contains violence or sex, that will push kids to do dangerous deeds. Moreover, not all advertising is really based on the truth. Hence, it is easy to make wrong decision upon it. Therefore, advertising could have negative and positive effects on our minds as it could provide information to make our life better and increase public awareness but impact the metal development of kids and adults decisions as well.
