2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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Nowadays,more and more chinese people are like to celebrate the western festivals,such as the Thanksgiving and Christmas......In some areas, especially in the prosperous cities where so many people prefer celebrating the western festivals than chinese traditional festivals. What's result in that?I think the reason is obvious.First,with the development of economy,now more and more western culture is boradcasted into china,including festivals, manners,lifestyle and customes.So that people can easy to learn the western culture.Second,comparing with chinese traditional festivals,the western festivals seems to more interesting and attractive.That's lead to a lot of people's attention is attracted by the western festivals. According to that,now the chinese tradition culture is being impacted by the foreign culture.Our traditional culture will lose its energy if the western culture continue to widespread in china.So all of chinese should urge the traditonal culture to develop and keep its life.