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Nowadays,more and more chinese people like to celebrate the western festivals,such as the Thanksgiving and Christmas.In some areas, especially in the prosperous cities where so many people prefer celebrating the western festivals than chinese traditional festivals. What's result in that?I think the reason is obvious.First,with the development of economy,now more and more western culture is broadcasted into china,including festivals, manners,lifestyle and customs.So that people can be easy to learn the western culture.Second,comparing with chinese traditional festivals,the western festivals seems to more interesting and attractive.That's cause a lot of people's attention is attracted by the western festivals. According to that,now the chinese tradition culture is being impacted by the foreign culture.Our traditional culture will lose its energy if the western culture continue to widespread in china.So all of the chinese should urge the traditional culture to develop and keep its life.
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