2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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With the development of technology and rising of living standard, the use of cell phone become more and more common. It has been deep into every cornor in people’s living. For example ,you are waken up by cellphone. Regardless of getting news ,intercoursing with friends ,people are accustomed to using cellphone. When most of people became used to the life with cellphone overtime problem can develop.First, it can cause security issues. We often see this scene ,people cross the road with looking down their phone rather than vehicle ahead. therefore,there are increasing traffic accident rate .second, reading phone long time often cause eyestrain,damaging our eyesight.finally, cellphone deeply change the people’s intercourse mode.and a series of new problem come out .we prefer connecting by the small machine instead of facing to facing.hence,we become more cold,less smile.especially,it significantly reduced communication with family.