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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we all know,will is the main reason that assesses to success. As a humorous saying goes, ''Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the word. I've done it hundreds of times.'' Thus,it is the significant guarantee towards success. Many great people finished great tasks with a strong will. Take Yuan LongPing for example.Yuan, father of hydrid rice, one of the great people in 20 century. He devoted his life to researching different kinds of rice. If he give up period of study, it is no doubt that achievement doesn't belong to him. As a student, we should learn from spirits on the great people. When we have trouble in study , it is important for us to focus on our will and keep confident. Only in this way , can we overcome difficulties ,even lead to success. Just Thomas Edison said, ''one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.'' So we can't give up. However, a number of students stop study to search for work. As far as my knowledge is concerned, they are not able to become a useful person without working hard. All in all, success depends on a strong will.
