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Are dialects just as acceptable in public place? May some people say "no",because dialects are only suitable for very small scope and many another people can not understand. In my opinion, dialects can be accepted in public places. Dialects can transfer a felling of cordial, and let people have more common topics. But it does not say to use dialects in every public places.I mean it have to depend the occasions. We may find a phenomenon that in some offices ,especially in Shanghai, the staffs are more likely to speck Shanghai dialect. Or in some meeting, they communicate using the dialects the outsiders can not understand. No matter the topic of family or the work. it seems that the dialects can offer them more felling. On the another hand. dialects are not always acceptable in occasions. For example, in some big international meetings or parties, people are supposed to use a unified language ,because different people from different places have their own dialects ,if they use their language no matter another people understand or not, things will be gone. In conclusion, dialects are acceptable in public places, but we should define the different occasions. If the dialects can be used suitable. it can get a very good result.
