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It maybe our common desires to experience the meaningful life, but when it comes to the topic “How to live a meaningful life”, the opinions are divided. In someone’s eyes, they agree that a meaningful life is just a comfortable life which means they can enjoy themselves as possible as they can. However, personally in my view, if we spend our whole life in pursuing things only for ourselves, we will surely let ourselves down when we look back. There’s an old saying that goes “The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it”. I can’t agree more. If there is a way to avoid disappointing life, it should be to try our best to find meaningful things which can also make contributions to the whole society. Even a single man can make a big difference to the world. Not to mention that everyone get together to bring changes to the society. It’s high time that we took measures to experience meaningful life. What’s more, it’s never too late to experience our meaningful life. So be yourself, enjoy your happiness and be helpful to others. It's worthy that we live meaningfully.
