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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3580
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

Fast food,with its features on delicious and convenience,are more and more popular among teenagers in America.This pie directly shows for us that preferences proportion of vary genre fast food. Obviously,the most popular food that occupy the largest rate of 33% is hamburger,followed by pizza with its proportion of 26%.And the third is french fries which is lower than pizza by 4%.Above of three can be seen common at KFC or M.However,the rest of three,including tacos,sushi and fried chicken,the proportion of each is less than 10%,and the preference of them are lower than the prior of three by far.Sushi as a food from Japan,seemly not be so popular in western country,as its the lowest rate of preference being seen from this pie. So,the eating habits of western people decide their choice more to trend on hamburgers or pizza instead of sushi which use rice as ripple.

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