2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

As is vividly shown in the picture,we make communication with others on the Internet without leaving our houses,which make contributions to a disagreement whether the development of Internet makes human beings distance short. We can see from the picture,people chat with others on the Internet instead of meetting them who we want to talk, which cause a problem that we have no communication with others in real life.Although Internet makes it possible for us to chat with people from different areas without worrying about their far distance,we should realize that we cannot lose ourselves in Internet world.We ought to meet someone who we want to chat with ,it helps us to make friends with who we meet,making our distance short.