the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是…
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。
文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;文中从句过少;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Information:Autumn outing. Subject: Freshman. Activity content:Visit plant party and watch exhibit of “man and Nature” on morning,visit the Summer Palace.You call leave your baggage in the left. Assemble time and place:Dec. 27th 7am; on the door of school.Please be on time. Attention list:1)Please ready your lunch.2) Participant should enter name before Thursday this week.