小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dod . His name is DUDU. He is very fat. Maybe sometimes I feed much food with him DUdu is already nine years old. Everyday when he heard my footsteps he would give me a big hug and lick my face .This is his welcoming way . He feels lonly when he alone. no companion play with him.