新东方托福高分作文:应该从外在判断一个人吗?

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As we know, many celebrates take the credit for their nice outlooks and catch up quickly. Most of us tend to cast blame on this phenomenon criticizing it as a symbol of public value deficiency. In my perspective, I also hold the view our appearances cannot enable us to make any judgement. Because, people success, for most people, stem from their ability instead of their beauty. What's more, it's unfair for someone having a ordinary outlooks and working very hard. Gradually it will lead to social problems. On the one hand, from within, we do enjoy the process working with handsome guys and beautiful girls. Nonetheless, we are live on our working. And working ability does matter rather than our faces, which is also not our bosses looking for. So that, our judgement should not based on something useless but true value of our abilities. For example, when I tried to pursue a girl. To be honest, I had two choices, the first candidate is common but very kind and soft. The other one is outgoing and beautiful. After long deliberation, I decided to tie a nut with the former girl. And we are happy now. I can definitely feel, finding a right personality partner can be the cradle of your happiness. Outlook really means minor value, when you compare it with something valuable quality. On the other hand, this value can also do harm to our society. If we lay too much emphasis on the outlook. People will be reluctant to work diligently. Because they know they have a good appearance and they can earn people's appraise without any effort. On the contrary, for the people, who bear a pressure on their outlooks will lose their momentum to keep going. In other words, the phenomenon stifle our creativity. Admittedly, a clean and energetic face could imply a good live habit. To some extent, it will also serve as a promise for your working skills. However, it's not so logically valid to accept this opinion. In a nutshell, ability does weigh over than our appearance. And also our country cannot be saturated with misleading value. Therefore, how can we still judge a person only by their look?