题目要求:
Mobile (cell) phones and the Internet play an important role in the way in which people relate to one another socially. Is this a positive or negative development? What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
写作思路:
第一段:介绍背景,电讯技术取代了面对面的交流方式
第二段:人们的联系增加;独立性增加
第三段:关系的质量下降;亲情交流被手机干扰太多
第四段:科技的好坏取决于我们如何用它
作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;句式变化多样;全文结构较为严谨。
Admitively, the function of mobile phone can not be neglected,as they play an important role for us to contact with others and bring endless information about this world .However,this reason can not become our pretext to use mobile phone so frequently that make the communication between people more difficult and indifference. In my opinion,I do not think the rapid development of mobile phone can influence the social positively,although they have some useful function and benefit to some people,such as business men or officials.However,the people who regard mobile phone as an entertainment tools are not minority.The features on them can be seen mostly are that their hands always hold on mobile phones,as their are more willing to playing games or reading e-books than talking with people around them,which will result to the alienate of relationship among people.I had experienced an awkward thing about my little sister.Once time we were invited to have a dinner to a friend who was an active boy.However,my sister only pay her attention on mobile phone during the process of chatting instead of listening what others said.Finally,my sister's action give rise to my friend's dissatisfy,and as the consequence,my sister had to make apologize to others.I think its a good example to demonstrate a common phenomenon that so many young people are so addicted in mobile phone that make their interaction ability decline.It is a strategy for the development of mobile phone. In the end,I want to warn those people who are lured by mobile phones.Mobile phone is necessary but not the important thing in your life,you should learn how to use them sensibility.
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