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2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:04浏览次数:5168
要求:
题目 网络的近与远(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the picture and interpret its meaning
2.explain its intended meaning

3.give your point of view

大体意思:

网络的近与远 一/客观描述图:很多人在上网 二/说明意思:网络的普及是拉近了人们的距离还是使人们越来越疏远?


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文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;可以适当增加副词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly shown in the picture,we make communication with others on the Internet without leaving our houses,which make contributions to a disagreement whether the development of the Internet makes human beings distance small. We can see from the picture,people chat with others on the Internet instead of meeting them who we want to talk.It causes a problem that we have no communication with others in real life.Although the Internet makes it possible for us to chat with people from different areas without worrying about their far distance,we should realize that we cannot bury ourselves in the Internet world.We ought to meet someone who we want to chat with,it helps us to make friends with who we meet,shortening our distance .

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