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From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@163.com Date: June 10th. Dear Mr. John Driscoll, I'm the general manager of Sales Department in Fox Electronic Company. I'm honored on behalf of our company to inform you that our meeting is scheduled in June 20th. The launch date of the new product and advertising campaign will be discussed then. Please let me know if this would be convenient for you or contact me to offer your arrangement. We are looking forward to setting up a long-term collaboration relationship with you. Best Regards, Tom Smith