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I have a good friend. He is tall and strong. He is grade one in junior middle school. In the morning, we go to school together on foot. In the afternoon, we go home together on foot. Sometimes we go by bike. He usually rides faster than me. But it is dangerous, so I always ask him to ride slowly.